Monday, February 4, 2013

Recent Edits

Hey Guys! I have a few edits for you guys that I have done. I hope you enjoy.

Thursday, January 24, 2013

MC Chronicle Lacrosse Article

Hey. I just wrote my article for the Third Edition of Mill Creek Chronicle. You can Read it below.

Out with the old, in with the new. This is how this year’s Varsity Boys lacrosse team will be when all of the best playing seniors are gone and the sophomores and juniors who have worked their way up the ladder move in at no time at all. We have not forgotten about all the hard work last year’s team put in, coming out with 10 and 8 over the 2012 Lacrosse season, but there is great surety that this season will be better than ever.
“We’re young, but we’re good,” said Will Peek, a senior on the Varsity boys lacrosse team at Mill Creek High School.
Majority of the freshmen and sophomores joined the Lacrosse club, known as the Gold Blackhawks, instead of trying out for the school. Last year, the Gold team came out with 24-2 fall season, 5-0 during the Derek Piper Tournament, and 14-2 at the All Fall Tournament.  
“We have a lot of good younger players coming out for the team this year.  I think they will benefit from playing with some of the older players.” said Coach Bo Adams, head coach of the boys Varsity team.
The Lacrosse team’s goals for this season are to make state playoffs and win. The players are looking forward to this season. Many of the senior players of last year have graduated, which gives room to a new team for this season.
The players who are playing this season hope to win state and the home playoffs. Some of the players will be their last year playing Lacrosse at Mill Creek High school, like Will Peek and Alex Schneider.
“We have a good chance at making playoffs this season.” said Alex Schneider, a senior lacrosse player.
Compared to last year, the lacrosse team has room to improve, just like every other team. The players’ expectations are set and determined to winning. 
Coach Adam is confident the team will be ready for this season.
“The players have been working extremely hard to get better and
Improve on the field and it would be a great accomplishment,” said Coach Adams.
They work as a true team and have their hopes high for the spring 2012 season. Keep your fingers crossed in hopes they make it to the state playoffs.

Saturday, December 22, 2012


Welcome to Acrux Boarding School for Juvenile Delinquents of Atlanta. Originally, Acrux was known as the Acrux Asylum. Over the course of 22 years, 1895-1927, it served as a refugee for the mentally ill adults of the great city. 10 years after the untold horrors of the asylums had been just a thing of the past, a married couple by the name of Leah and Jon Hamilton bought the run down place. They were out caste of society and wanted to make a change for the children who were like them. They were in betweeners. Not human, not dead, but supernaturals. They were the off springs of good and evil, a positive and a negative, angel and demon. When they bought the Asylum, they didn't know much of how they would run it. They just opened it for the Disturbed Teens. At first, it seemed like a bust. Few teens really came due to scared parents, but as time went, more and more showed on court orders or last minute resorts of change. 

The Misfits: This is the broad term for all students that attend Acrux. Students are gifted in the powers of light and dark. By the time of graduation, they must choose between good and evil, to be 'angels' or to be 'demons'. The Misfits have special gifts. It's a mix of power formed between the bonding of their parents. Some can bend elements, like fire or water, some can levitate, vanish in thin air, raise the dead. It all depends on their parents powers. Most of them are at Acrux for being just bad. They can't master what they don't know.

Creepsters: A group of the students are known as the creepsters. They are truly antisocial. They keep to themselves and pretend nothing exist.Most students think they are the only true freaks at the school. What the students don't know, is they are the off springs of some of the worst demons out there. Darkness has taken them on before they even matured.(Names later)

Good/Evil Tattoo: Everyone remember Livi? You see Angels from above, like her, used to have a angel wing tattoo then it got split. Gabriel, the arch angel, knew that this would be a sign to mark the in betweeners, just like Livi. These misfits are the mix of angels/demons, but Livi was a fallen Angel who had never chosen a side. This really makes her a misfit(Buutt not for long). 

Creepsters is a book idea that I'm going to start plotting some time after the new year. It will be a side book to Blood Revenge, but it has nothing to do with it.

*Keep On Dreaming*

Friday, December 21, 2012

Blood Revenge: Chapter 4

                August 18th, 1825

                1825 was the date Ramona had "changed".  I read on, though the ink had smeared over time.

                Our deal was simple.  My fear of death and thirst for knowledge traded for a connection above ground. He was a gentleman, which was something I didn't think was possible since he was the tyrant of hell. Mama and her stories seemed to be like a lie. He gave me the power to read, write, to know before the happenings, to not die. I'll age. It'll just be slow, so very slow. Now, when Death comes for me, I'll be able to be content with my long life and greet him like an old friend. He asks that I be his eyes in my world. If I see something wrong, then I’ll tell him. He gave me a book. Now, it is blank, though he assures me over time, as his trust grows, it will show me all the secrets of the universe. I don’t believe him, but I have to because now it’s too late to take back the deal. I know Mama would be ashamed of what I’ve done. I’m ashamed with what I’ve done. The thought of watching these people die while I live… It’s something I never thought of till now. It’s funny. I can read, write, and speak properly now after this deal. As of Yesterday, I couldn’t even say the world “The” without making it Dah. Master James can’t know this. He’d strike me if he even knew I was writing in a journal. Before this deal, I saw him as only a Master, but now I see him as an oppressor. I just can’t do anything about it. Please. Let me take back all the thoughts.

Yep. Hit 9,00 words. Chapter 4. I think it's coming along pretty well. I've decided to slow it down and get more research done on my characters. I don't want to mess it up. I hope to finish Chapter 9 by the end of my break. Crossing my fingers.

So far, Livi hasn't met Jekla or Warren. Noel's been introduced with his glorious blondeness. Ramona's entire secretive truth is being revealed. Aria visits in Livi's dream. The hellfire scene and Deimos's introduction. I'm really excited to finish the dream portion I'm currently writing. It's a bit hard because I'm trying to make it perfect for my readers. 

*Keep On Dreaming*

Follow by Email